50 Words to NEVER Use Instead of Said plus 240 Words to Use

instead of said

Yes, there really are 50 words writers use all the time instead of said. Words that should never be used to replace said.

This common mistake by new writers, need not be a mistake you make. Find out what these words are and why you should never use them.

  Writing effective, compelling dialog is not easy.

  This post will show you several tricks to write dynamic dialog.

Contents:  What is a Dialog (Speech) Tag?

                    More expressive verbs can change the meaning of your dialog.

                     Adverbs can express emotion in dialog.

                      Dialog is an essential part of storytelling.

                       List of 240 words to replace said

                       50 words NOT to use to replace said.

                       How to use these 50 words correctly in dialog.

What is a Dialog (Speech) Tag?

Let’s start at the beginning. The purpose of speech tags is to identify the speaker.  It’s vital for your reader to knows who is talking. Usually that means having a dialog tag before, after, or in the middle of the first line of dialog.

Speech tags  help avoid confusion for your reader.

Here’s how it works. A tag contains a noun or pronoun (example: Bill, Jane, She, President, or wife) and a verb (said, ask, whispered, shouted).

It does not matter whether the noun or pronoun comes first. Example: Jane replied,  She replied,

Or the verb comes first. Example: whispered Jane, whispered she.

Both are correct. I don’t know about you, but I don’t like the verb first with a pronoun. Even if it is  correct grammar.

The key is to strive to be consistent.

Here are a few things we want to share with you before we get to the list.

Should you use other words Instead of Said?

In the opinion of many writers, you should only use said and ask in your dialog tags, nothing else.

I agree there is nothing wrong with using said and ask. These  are not words to be avoided.

Simple tags like said, ask, replied, and inquired are kind of invisible. Most readers don’t even notice them. That can be an advantage in some ways.

Said and ask don’t distract the reader.

So why struggle to find alternatives?

  • Because using the same word repeatedly is boring.
  • Sometimes the dialog doesn’t express the nuances you are looking for.
  • Alternate words may be more precise.

Please note: If your point can be made with words. Say it with words not fancy dialog tags. Let your dialog do the talking. Put energy into making your character’s words strong enough.

Frankly, if you can say it in words, and no tags. Do it. Or use simple speech tags.

But if you want to enliven your dialog, alternatives may be necessary.

John and I developed this list as a handy tool for when we were looking for something more expressive. This is a tool John and I have used for years.

We love it. When we are looking for just the right word, we simply pull out our list. We’ve divided it into categories to make it easier.

Now, you can do the same thing. either bookmark or print the list.  So, it will be available whenever you need it.

instead of said in dialog

More Expressive Verbs, Can Change the Meaning of Your Dialog.

Using other verbs may strengthen you dialog, and actually express different emotions.

There are countless verbs that can be used instead of said.

EXAMPLES:

“I can’t” she wailed

“I can’t” she confided

“I can’t” she apologized

“I can’t” she pleaded

Can you see how a replacement word for said can change the meaning of your dialog?

Using the right VERB will create more vibrant dialog

  ADVERBS Can Express Emotion

  Here is one secrete to better dialog. Adverbs often express feelings. So, you could use adverbs. 

But here’s a better idea. Change the adverb (the LY word) to a verb.

                             There is no need for the word said if you use the verb.

                                              EXAMPLES:

Said teasingly                       Teaseduse verbs instead of said

Said  worriedly                    Worried

Said Jokingly                        Joked

Said loudly                           Shouted, yelled, screamed

Said softly                    Murmured, whispered, muttered

Can you see how much stronger that is?

Writing Good Dialog is an Essential Part of Storytelling.

Dialog is the lifeblood of a story. You can improve your writing by striving to put at least some dialog on each page.

Tell your story through the words of your characters and your readers will love your writing.

Dialog can:dialog relationships

  1. Show emotion
  2. Advance the plot
  3.  Provide valuable clues to your character’s personality.
  4. Explain motivation of a character
  5. Show their relationships

So, try adding dialog to make your writing more interesting.

Writing dynamic dialog is a skill that can be learned.

Having a list of alternate words for said and ask, has improved our creative writing. We believe our list will help elevate your writing too.

We think this list will stimulate your thinking and fine tune your dialog tags.

If you agree, you might want to check out our list of Replacement Words for ASK.

In addition, alternate words may be more precise.

We hope  this list of words to use instead of said will be helpful to you.

You might want to print or bookmark this post, so when you need another word for said you have a resource.

240 Words to Replace  SAID

Some words may be included in more than one category.

General

Answered replied Addressed Admitted Announced
Agreed Alleged Blurted Called Cried out
Chat Chorused Claimed Commented Continued
Declared Denied Divulge Explained Jested
Joked Lied Mentioned Maintained Mimicked
 Marveled Quoted Recalled  Related Remarked
 Responded Related  Quipped  Informed  Told
 Stated  Spoke  Mentioned  Promised Quipped
 Dictated  Repeated Remembered Spoke  Swore
Stressed Wished Teased Uttered Vowed
Warned Exposed Mocked Commented Testified
Went on and on Disclosed Revealed Shared Voiced
Comforted Guessed Interpreted Interjected

 

Tone of Voice

Barked Cheered Groaned Bawled Crowed
Cackled Grumbled Croaked Mumbled Boomed
Drawled Murmured Ranted Wailed Roared
Whispered Sputtered Shrieked  Stuttered Thundered
Sputtered Trumpeted Stammered Squeaked Shouted
Grumbled Snarled Whined Screamed Sang
Under breath

Argument / Anger

Accused Bossed Argued Carped Contended
Advised Declined Commanded Convinced Cross examined
Censored Criticized Chided Countered Emphasized
Grumbled Corrected Cautioned Challenged Denied
Disagreed Denied Ordered Raged Disputed
Distrusted Opposed Protested Interrupted Recanted
Retorted Scolded Objected Scoffed Remonstrated
Pleaded Sassed Reprimanded Proclaimed Snapped
Snarled Told off Pointed out Screamed Upbraided
Informed Scolded Decided Griped Dubious
Provoked Contested Opposed incited Jabbed

 

Acceptance /Acknowledge

Accepted Affirmed Agreed Acknowledged Assumed
Confirmed Admitted Confessed Justified Settled
Understood Verified Approved Avowed Bragged
Conceded Reassured Proffered Conceded

 

Excitement /Joy

Babbled Crooned Praised Bubbled Declared
Preached Burst forth Exclaimed Proclaimed Cheered
Hollered Professed Rejoiced Congratulated Commented
Shouted Eulogized Lauded Applauded Admired
Trumpeted Glorified

Persuasion / Suggestion / Urge

Advised Coaxed Dared Pleaded Hinted
Implied Invited Begged Appealed Assured
Proffered Beseech Asserted Assured Volunteered
Cajoled Prescribed Warned  Cautioned Encouraged
Recommended Insisted  Wheedled Needled Solicited
Implored Suggested Wooed Entreated Importuned
Urged Proposed Threatened Teased Demanded
Compelled Prodded Advised Persuaded Pestered
Pushed Pumped Sued Prayed Prompted
Motivated Demanded Coerced Coaxed Urged
Pressed Prodded Grilled Pried Probed
Commanded Goaded Beckoned Provoked Summoned
Nagged Pried Tempted Enjoined Prodded

 

Look for Answers

Examined Asked Entreated Probed Queried
Surveyed Interrogated Studied Explored Interviewed
Sought Searched Requested Calculated Suspected
Canvassed Inspected Pumped Dug into Solicited
Analyzed Snooped Begged Pry Picked his brain
Quizzed Inquired Bid challenged Popped the question
Questioned Interrogated Probed Doubted Propositioned
Requested Suspected Explored Snooped Tested
Solicited Supplicated Petitioned Appealed

 

 Help us add more words in comments.

Here are some other sites with different lists.

https://owlcation.com/humanities/400-Alternative-words-for-said

https://writersbeat.com/200-words-instead-of-said-t11782.html

Get this List as a PDF Cheat Sheet   

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Words NOT to Use Instead of Said

Yes there are verbs you should never use instead of said in your dialog tags.

When we first started writing our novels, this is a mistake we made.

I wish someone had showed this to us before we had written our first book. We had to go back and fix much of our dialog.

So, here’s the problem:

Can someone belch a line of dialog. Can they smile the words. No, of course not.

Yet, oddly enough, it is easy to forget these actions can not be speech tags.

It is important for you to recognize words that should never be used in a dialog tag.

Look at the list. Many are actions. Words can’t fume, clear their throat, or jeer.

A character’s voice can quiver or tremble but not the dialog.

Hands can wave or signal. Heads can nod.

Words don’t weep,  spit or seethe. Those are things the character does in the middle of the dialog.

So these words should NEVER be useddon't panic instead of said in a dialog tag.

Here is the list of words you should never use. 

Of course this isn’t all of them. But it should give you a good idea of the problem.

Belched               laughed              smiled                       clucked tongue         gasped

Beamed              trembled            wept                           choked                       jeered

Giggled               quivered             shrugged                   coughed                    gulped

Chuckled            grinned              breathed                    yawned                     sniffed

Nodded               smirked             leered                         sneered                    sniffled

Snorted              shivered              shuddered                 quaked                     shook

Spit                     snickered            cleared throat            shook head            waved

Wept                   growled               fumed                         ticked off                glowered

Seethed               thrilled               hissed                         signaled                  scowled

gurgled                sighed                swallowed                  exhaled                   inhaled

We created this list to remind ourselves not to make this mistake.

Since, these are not all of the words to watch for, you should be mindful of not using actions instead of said in speech tags.

Download this list as a PDF cheat sheet Words never to use in dialog tags

How to Use These 50 Words Correctly In Dialog

Let me explain; the correct way to use these words. Use them in a separate sentence woven in between the dialog.

These words do help your reader visualize your character’s conversations. They just need to be used properly. Isn’t that what we all want to learn?

In case your wondering how this works, here are some examples.

EXAMPLES:

WRONG: “I don’t see why not,”Chen smiled

CORRECT: Chen smiled. ” I don’t see why not.”

WRONG:“Of course we can,” Denise giggled.

CORRECT: “Of course we Can.” Denise giggled.

WRONG: “I’m Serious,”Chen nodded. “We can do this.”

CORRECT “I’m serious,” said Chen and nodded. “We can do this.”

As you can see;to use these words correctly is mostly a matter of punctuation.

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Happy Writing

John & Patty    @writingagreatbook.com 2018

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